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I’m posting excerpts from Doll, a little F/f BDSM story that I started back in January of 2014. It’s kind of a UFO (UnFinished Object) that is sort of turning back into a WiP. We’ll see.
Picking up from last week, and Doll’s memory/flashback to her meeting with the woman with the boots and bullwhip.
Until I saw her.
It was a Friday night, still early; the regulars hadn’t begun wandering in yet. I was sitting at the bar talking to Victor, the owner’s sub, regular bartender, and occasional bouncer, when the door opened and an icy blast of wind came in.
“Who’s she?” I couldn’t tear my eyes away from the woman who had entered with the wind, nor could I wait for an answer; I slid off of the stool and approached, stopping at a respectful distance, my eyes carefully lowered.
“May I take your coat, Ma’am?”
I could almost see Victor’s amused half-smile but it didn’t matter: nothing mattered except being near her, being of service to her. I had never met anyone with a presence like hers; she owned the room simply by walking into it.
11 responses to “Rainbow Snippet for 1-6-2018”
Ooh, I definitely want to know more about this woman who can own a room.
This definitely sounds intriguing :)
Lust at first sight :)
Ooh la la! I’m looking forward to her description!
I can’t wait to find out more about her :)
Oooh, nice. I’ve only met a handful of people who can do that, but I can really see her here…
Oh, I’d love to know what she looked like! :)
Love that last line.
Wow, what a cool reaction. Can’t wait to learn more about this mysterious woman!