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Rainbow Snippet for 2-24-2018

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Rainbow Snippets is a group for LGBTQ+ authors, bloggers, and readers to gather once a week and share six sentences from a work of fiction–a WIP or a finished work or even a 6-sentence book recommendation (no spoilers please!).   Check out all the other awesome snippets by clicking on the picture above.

I’m posting excerpts from Doll, a little F/f BDSM story that I started back in January of 2014. It’s kind of a UFO (UnFinished Object) that is sort of turning back into a WiP. We’ll see.

Picking up from last week, and Doll’s memory/flashback to her meeting with the woman with the boots and bullwhip.

“She has that effect on every single submissive that meets her.  Hell, there are even a few Doms that wouldn’t mind submitting to her.”

“You aren’t affected.”

“I’m not a single submissive,” he replied with a wink.

I managed a smile but my gaze still drifted to her.  “Tell me about her.”

“No.  I don’t want to see you get hurt.”

I held his gaze until he gave in.

“Her name is Melisande, but no one calls her anything other than Miss M,” he said with a heavy sigh. 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Rainbow Snippet for 2-17-2018

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Rainbow Snippets is a group for LGBTQ+ authors, bloggers, and readers to gather once a week and share six sentences from a work of fiction–a WIP or a finished work or even a 6-sentence book recommendation (no spoilers please!).   Check out all the other awesome snippets by clicking on the picture above.

I’m posting excerpts from Doll, a little F/f BDSM story that I started back in January of 2014. It’s kind of a UFO (UnFinished Object) that is sort of turning back into a WiP. We’ll see.

 

Picking up from last week, and Doll’s memory/flashback to her meeting with the woman with the boots and bullwhip.

“Victor…”I wasn’t sure which was irritating me more: Victor calling me “Babs” or telling me what to do.

He ignored the warning in my voice, intent on more important things.  “Look, I know what’s going through your mind right now.  You prefer men. You don’t even know her.  But if she gave you the faintest hint of interest you would beg to be in her collar.”

“I would not.”  I sighed and lowered my gaze to the smooth wooden bar top.  “I would.”  I looked up at him.  “How did you know?”

He shrugged.  “She has that effect on every single submissive that meets her.  Hell, there are even a few Doms that wouldn’t mind submitting to her.”

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Rainbow Snippet for 2-10-2018

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Rainbow Snippets is a group for LGBTQ+ authors, bloggers, and readers to gather once a week and share six sentences from a work of fiction–a WIP or a finished work or even a 6-sentence book recommendation (no spoilers please!).   Check out all the other awesome snippets by clicking on the picture above.

I’m posting excerpts from Doll, a little F/f BDSM story that I started back in January of 2014. It’s kind of a UFO (UnFinished Object) that is sort of turning back into a WiP. We’ll see.

 

Picking up from last week, and Doll’s memory/flashback to her meeting with the woman with the boots and bullwhip.

I didn’t intend to look for her when I left the coat room, but I couldn’t seem to help myself. 

She sat alone at a corner table, and I studied her from the corner of my eye as I made my way to the bar, taking in details I had missed earlier: dark hair in a French braid, fair skin, understated make up. She was taller than I was, but the clothes she wore made her seem soft, somehow, but that softness was at odds with the air of command that radiated from her.

I sighed as I took a seat at the bar, and Victor raised an eyebrow.

“Who is she?”

He shook his head. “No, Babs. You don’t want to get mixed up with her.”

“Victor…”I wasn’t sure which was irritating me more: Victor calling me “Babs” or telling me what to do.

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Rainbow Snippet for 2-3-2018

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Rainbow Snippets is a group for LGBTQ+ authors, bloggers, and readers to gather once a week and share six sentences from a work of fiction–a WIP or a finished work or even a 6-sentence book recommendation (no spoilers please!).   Check out all the other awesome snippets by clicking on the picture above.

I’m posting excerpts from Doll, a little F/f BDSM story that I started back in January of 2014. It’s kind of a UFO (UnFinished Object) that is sort of turning back into a WiP. We’ll see.

Picking up from last week:

Unbidden, my mind conjured up fantasies of her touch, and I shuddered. 

I had never wanted anyone – man or woman – the way I wanted her.

For a moment I considered slipping a note into her coat pocket with my name and phone number, but that would be far too forward and presumptuous, not to mention that it sounded like something from a bad Doris Day movie. With a sigh I ran my hands along her coat, smoothing out imaginary wrinkles, wishing…

I didn’t intend to look for her when I left the coat room, but I couldn’t seem to help myself. 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Rainbow Snippet for 1-27-2018

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Rainbow Snippets is a group for LGBTQ+ authors, bloggers, and readers to gather once a week and share six sentences from a work of fiction–a WIP or a finished work or even a 6-sentence book recommendation (no spoilers please!).   Check out all the other awesome snippets by clicking on the picture above.

I’m posting excerpts from Doll, a little F/f BDSM story that I started back in January of 2014. It’s kind of a UFO (UnFinished Object) that is sort of turning back into a WiP. We’ll see.

Picking up from last week, and Doll’s memory/flashback to her meeting with the woman with the boots and bullwhip.

It was nothing but an acknowledgement, I told myself, but I could not slow the beating of my heart as she moved past me, and I slipped into to the coat room, grateful for the solitude to try to collect myself.

She probably prefers men, I thought as I selected a padded hanger and carefully arranged her long leather coat on it. For that matter, I thought as I hung it in an alcove where it would not be disturbed, I prefer men.

It was true. I had scened with women, but much preferred the touch of a man’s hand. 

Unbidden, my mind conjured up fantasies of her touch, and I shuddered. 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Rainbow Snippet for 1-20-2018

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Rainbow Snippets is a group for LGBTQ+ authors, bloggers, and readers to gather once a week and share six sentences from a work of fiction–a WIP or a finished work or even a 6-sentence book recommendation (no spoilers please!).   Check out all the other awesome snippets by clicking on the picture above.

I’m posting excerpts from Doll, a little F/f BDSM story that I started back in January of 2014. It’s kind of a UFO (UnFinished Object) that is sort of turning back into a WiP. We’ll see.

Picking up from last week, and Doll’s memory/flashback to her meeting with the woman with the boots and bullwhip.

 

“What is your name?”

Her voice was surprisingly warm and gentle and I felt blessed to have had her speak to me.

“Barbara, Ma’am,” I replied, taking the coat that she handed to me.

“Barbara,” she repeated. “Thank you.” 

I had never liked my name, but hearing it from her lips sent a surge of desire through me.

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Rainbow Snippet for 1-13-2018

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Rainbow Snippets is a group for LGBTQ+ authors, bloggers, and readers to gather once a week and share six sentences from a work of fiction–a WIP or a finished work or even a 6-sentence book recommendation (no spoilers please!).   Check out all the other awesome snippets by clicking on the picture above.

I’m posting excerpts from Doll, a little F/f BDSM story that I started back in January of 2014. It’s kind of a UFO (UnFinished Object) that is sort of turning back into a WiP. We’ll see.

 

Picking up from last week, and Doll’s memory/flashback to her meeting with the woman with the boots and bullwhip.

…she owned the room simply by walking into it.

She wore black leather boots – fashion, not fetish. Beneath her long black leather coat, she wore a grey wool skirt that fell to mid-calf and a white blouse, probably silk. She had no jewelry other than a silver and black watch that I saw a glimpse of as she handed me her coat.

There was nothing about her that said she was part of the scene, and yet…

I felt her gaze on me and I shivered. I was used to men looking at me, used to their stares and appraisal, but she was different; it wasn’t my body that she was appraising, but my soul, my submissiveness, my willingness to please. 

It was that willingness – that need – to please that made me tremble, made me pray to be found… not worthy, but acceptable.

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Rainbow Snippet for 1-6-2018

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Rainbow Snippets is a group for LGBTQ+ authors, bloggers, and readers to gather once a week and share six sentences from a work of fiction–a WIP or a finished work or even a 6-sentence book recommendation (no spoilers please!).   Check out all the other awesome snippets by clicking on the picture above.

I’m posting excerpts from Doll, a little F/f BDSM story that I started back in January of 2014. It’s kind of a UFO (UnFinished Object) that is sort of turning back into a WiP. We’ll see.

 

Picking up from last week, and Doll’s memory/flashback to her meeting with the woman with the boots and bullwhip.

Until I saw her.

It was a Friday night, still early; the regulars hadn’t begun wandering in yet. I was sitting at the bar talking to Victor, the owner’s sub, regular bartender, and occasional bouncer, when the door opened and an icy blast of wind came in.

“Who’s she?” I couldn’t tear my eyes away from the woman who had entered with the wind, nor could I wait for an answer; I slid off of the stool and approached, stopping at a respectful distance, my eyes carefully lowered.

“May I take your coat, Ma’am?”

I could almost see Victor’s amused half-smile but it didn’t matter: nothing mattered except being near her, being of service to her. I had never met anyone with a presence like hers; she owned the room simply by walking into it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Rainbow Snippet for 12-30-2017

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Rainbow Snippets is a group for LGBTQ+ authors, bloggers, and readers to gather once a week and share six sentences from a work of fiction–a WIP or a finished work or even a 6-sentence book recommendation (no spoilers please!).   Check out all the other awesome snippets by clicking on the picture above.

I’m posting excerpts from Doll, a little F/f BDSM story that I started back in January of 2014 for Siobhan Muir’s Thursday Threads Flash Fiction Challenge. It got a little over the word limit, but I liked it, so decided to keep it as the start an eventual novel. Maybe.

This follows from last week – sort of. It’s the start of a flashback to Doll’s first meeting with the woman who would come to be her Mistress. (And, hey! It’s actually exactly six sentences this week!) (Courtesy of some changes from the original, but hey… Six sentences!)

I had never given any thought to being owned by a woman; actually, I had never given any thought to being owned by anyone.

Until I saw her.

Until I saw her I was perfectly content with casual scening at Restraint, a local BDSM club. 

I was a regular there and knew just about everyone, having scened with most of them at one time or another. I was a popular bottom: experienced enough at most forms of play to be useful for demonstration and training and always willing to scene, but not seeking a permanent relationship.

Until I saw her.

 

 

 

 

 

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Rainbow Snippet for 12-23-2017

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Rainbow Snippets is a group for LGBTQ+ authors, bloggers, and readers to gather once a week and share six sentences from a work of fiction–a WIP or a finished work or even a 6-sentence book recommendation (no spoilers please!).   Check out all the other awesome snippets by clicking on the picture above.

I’m posting excerpts from Doll, a little F/f BDSM story that I started back in January of 2014 for Siobhan Muir’s Thursday Threads Flash Fiction Challenge. It got a little over the word limit, but I liked it, so decided to keep it as the start an eventual novel. Maybe.

I don’t normally write in first person so I have no idea how this happened.  I’m blaming the writing prompt.

I also don’t normally write non spec-fic.

I also have no idea where this is going. It was and will probably continue to be) written in snippet form. (I was writing a few lines a week back then for another snippet group.)

Picking up from last week which ended with our narrator, Doll, being pulled to her feet with the end of a bullwhip wrapped around her throat.

Gentle fingers tangled in my hair and lips – soft but firm – captured mine and I yielded to them with a soft hungry moan.  I couldn’t help it; I was trained not to hide my emotions or my responses — hiding them was a form of lying and my Owner demanded truth, accepted nothing less than truth. 

I was led a few steps away from the others and pulled close, into a warm embrace.  Those same lips teased my ear.

“Mine,” she whispered, and I shivered in pleasure at the word.  “Tell me about the others.”

 

 

 

 

 

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