Rainbow Snippet for 3-23-2024

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Rainbow Snippets is a group for LGBTQ+ authors, bloggers, and readers to gather once a week and share six sentences from a work of fiction–a WIP or a finished work or even a 6-sentence book recommendation (no spoilers please!).  Check out all the other awesome snippets by clicking on the picture above.

I’m still posting from an unnamed M/M fantasy trilogy WiP. This follows from last week’s snippet and is very rough draftish, so please squint and ignore the “half-remembered memory” line.

“I don’t suppose I need to tell you to be careful in the city, do I? You’ll be safe enough here, and in the castle itself, but the home base of the Temple of Misdem is here and its clerics don’t like wizards.”

Ta’elsin nodded, his mind shying away from another half-remembered memory. “What is this place?” he asked, searching for safer ground.

“It’s a guest house of sorts. Maintained by the crown for visiting dignitaries, including wizards.”

Ta’elsin frowned. “But if the Temple of Misdem hates wizards so much why do they allow this place to stand?”

Berrebren chuckled. “Because the Crown wants it here and they don’t dare go against the king – yet. It may happen someday but for right now they follow the King’s Rule.”

 

 

 

 

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Finally Friday

Here we are, heading into another weekend that will be over before I know it. At least the next two weeks are only four days long, courtesy of Easter. (I could get used to working four days, having four days off, and working four days. I’m afraid my checkbook won’t appreciate it, though.)

This weekend I’m going to be cooking a lot of dog food so that I can put it in the freezer and have it made ahead. I have plans to do eight weeks’ worth. The first batch is in the slow cooker and has about an hour to go. I’ll do at least three batches tomorrow, maybe four. At least it’s not overly labor-intensive, especially since I have all the ingredients sorted and grouped together, ready to just dump and go.

I’m also hoping that I’ll be doing a lot of writing as I’m now 300 words behind on my 100 words a day, courtesy of a raging migraine that doesn’t want to go away. (I’m seeing double typing this.)

And hopefully the cramp in my right hand will have eased up by tomorrow as well.

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Wednesday Words #482 (3/20/2024)

Welcome to Wednesday Words!  Every Wednesday I will post some sort of prompt for a flash fiction piece.  The prompt will go live just after midnight Eastern time.

The prompt might be a picture, or it might be a list of things to include in a story, or maybe a phrase or a question or something from a “news of the weird” type thing, or a… who knows?

After that, it’s up to you.  But if you do use the prompt to write a bit of flash fiction (say, 500 words or so) I’d love to see what you came up with, so comment below with a link to where it is on your blog (or on WattPad or wherever).

(And a pingback to the post here where you found the prompt would be appreciated but isn’t necessary.)

Oh, and this isn’t a contest or anything.  It’s just a (hopefully) fun thing for all concerned.

And, hey, if it inspires more than 500 or so words, run with it!

This week’s prompt:

a secret admirer
a cart
glue

And, as always, I’d love to see what you come up with!

 

 

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I’m Doing It Again

I’m writing a series out of order.

Again.

You’d think I would have learned from the mess that is the Academy of the Accord series, but no… I’m now in the midst of making the same mess out of the Elven Bard series.

The Elven Bard series has a prequel in progress. And I’m currently working on a sequel, and have another sequel started. I’m fairly certain that my current sequel comes before the other one, though, so that’s a good thing.

The problem is that some of the plot points in this sequel are dependent on things from the prequel.

If you think that this is leading to an editing nightmare, you’re not the only one. I left myself a note in yesterday’s writing that I need to finish the prequel and make sure that what I just wrote was true, which prompted the following comment from my accountability partner: “That last note bodes editing problems, doesn’t it?”

Um, yeah. It does. It most definitely does.

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Rainbow Snippet for 3-16-2024

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Rainbow Snippets is a group for LGBTQ+ authors, bloggers, and readers to gather once a week and share six sentences from a work of fiction–a WIP or a finished work or even a 6-sentence book recommendation (no spoilers please!).  Check out all the other awesome snippets by clicking on the picture above.

I’m still posting from an unnamed M/M fantasy trilogy WiP, but am skipping ahead from the prologue to the first chapter. (Arrek rescued Ta’elsin and “earned” the right to call his father (the king’s younger brother) “Father” and was taken from the temple back into the castle.)

This is set roughly thirteen years later and follows from last week’s snippet.

“What has gotten into you? You were more than eager to come along on this trip when we started out.”

“I don’t know. I just…”  He looked at the walls again and shuddered, plagued by something that he couldn’t quite put his finger on.

Berrebren watched him for a moment, frowning slightly. “You don’t remember this place, do you?”

“I don’t… I don’t know. I think I should but…”

Berrebren nodded. “It’s been thirteen years. I’m sure it looked different to you then.”

Thirteen years. Ta’elsin’s mind shied away from the events of thirteen years ago but he nodded. Thirteen years ago Sagyl had carried him away from a place of pain and terror. It had taken over a year for the nightmares to end and Ta’elsin did not want them to start again.

 

 

 

 

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First Drafts

The weeks get longer and the weekends get shorter. I’m pretty sure that’s some sort of time travel.

I read something this past week that I really liked (especially since I’m struggling my way through the first draft of a sequel). “All first drafts are perfect because they only have to be written.” (Now if I could just remember where I read it so I could attribute it properly… but for now, know that it isn’t my quote.) *

At any rate, it’s certainly a far cry from Hemingway’s “The first draft of anything is shit.”

Oddly, however, both of those quotes make me feel better about the mess I’m creating by writing 100 words at a time, with a missing outline, and without looking back at what has already been written. It’s going to be a hot mess to edit, but without the shitty and perfect first draft, editing will never happen.

Or as Anne Lamott put it, “The first draft is the down draft – you just get it down. The second draft is the up draft – you fix it up.”

I don’t know if there are any quotes for the third through 300th drafts.

* I Googled it:
Every first draft is perfect because all the first draft has to do is exist. It’s perfect in its existence. The only way it could be imperfect would be to NOT exist.”

― Jane Smiley

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Wednesday Words #481 (3/13/2024)

Welcome to Wednesday Words!  Every Wednesday I will post some sort of prompt for a flash fiction piece.  The prompt will go live just after midnight Eastern time.

The prompt might be a picture, or it might be a list of things to include in a story, or maybe a phrase or a question or something from a “news of the weird” type thing, or a… who knows?

After that, it’s up to you.  But if you do use the prompt to write a bit of flash fiction (say, 500 words or so) I’d love to see what you came up with, so comment below with a link to where it is on your blog (or on WattPad or wherever).

(And a pingback to the post here where you found the prompt would be appreciated but isn’t necessary.)

Oh, and this isn’t a contest or anything.  It’s just a (hopefully) fun thing for all concerned.

And, hey, if it inspires more than 500 or so words, run with it!

This week’s prompt:

finding things you didn’t know you’d lost
a new job
people you thought were friends

And, as always, I’d love to see what you come up with!

 

 

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Monday Miscellany

Well, I finally wrote the fight scene. Or non-fight scene. The poor mercenaries/guards didn’t stand a chance and it was over before it even began. I’ll emphasize the humor of it in the re-write, but at least it’s done, and wasn’t nearly as bad as I’d feared.

I never did find my noise-cancelling headphones, but haven’t really looked that hard for them. They weren’t where I thought they were, so now I’m afraid that they’re under the avalanche zone and I don’t feel up to tackling that at the moment.

Daylight Savings Time hit this weekend, and no one wanted to go back to work today. Not that anyone ever does on a Monday, but even I, the morning person, wanted to go back to bed.

But I went to work, because I need the money. (I used to have a t-shirt that said, “I Owe, I Owe, So Off To Work I Go.” I think I need that on a bumper sticker.)

I’m just feeling beaten down today. It’s a combination of things that seem to be sucking the life and joy out of me.

And to add insult to injury, there was snow on my car this morning — over a fairly heavy coat of ice.

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Rainbow Snippet for 3-9-2024

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Rainbow Snippets is a group for LGBTQ+ authors, bloggers, and readers to gather once a week and share six sentences from a work of fiction–a WIP or a finished work or even a 6-sentence book recommendation (no spoilers please!).  Check out all the other awesome snippets by clicking on the picture above.

I’m still posting from an unnamed M/M fantasy trilogy WiP, but am skipping ahead from the prologue to the first chapter. (Arrek rescued Ta’elsin and “earned” the right to call his father (the king’s younger brother) “Father” and was taken from the temple back into the castle.)

This is set roughly thirteen years later.

Swallowing the nameless fear that sucked the air from his lungs he (Ta’elsin) forced himself to continue. Berrebren was not the most patient of men and he swallowed the ache that came as he remembered Sagyl, the wizard who had begun his training. 

Sagyl had been warm and kind and loving, and Ta’elsin had felt safe with him and had thrived under his gentle tutelage, but he had grown ill and had been unable to continue teaching him. Ta’elsin had stayed with him until he yielded to death, then had followed his instructions and had gone to Berrebren’s tower, bearing a letter of introduction. 

Berrebren had been expecting him, but even so the welcome was not a warm one. He made it clear from the start that Ta’elsin was only there because he owed a debt to Sagyl and in the last two years he had never wavered from his original stance that Ta’elsin was a nuisance and an unwelcome intruder, and he had spent every minute of the time missing Sagyl.

“Well, come on.” 

The sheer impatience in Berrebren’s voice startled him: he hadn’t realized that his steps had begun lagging.

“I’m sorry, Berrebren.”

“What has gotten into you? You were more than eager to come along on this trip when we started out.”

 

 

 

 

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Fight!

I’ve spent all week procrastinating writing a fight scene in my current WiP. I really hate writing fight scenes; I get too bogged down in working out the logistics of them. Unfortunately, I have come to the point where it needs to be written, which will at least make my accountability partner happy. (She makes sure I write my 100 words a day, nagging me until I send them to her, and she’s been jonesing for a fight scene.)

At least it’s going to be a quick fight. Two against five, and any one of the five could take both of the mercenaries. Still, it’s a warm-up for bigger battles to come. (I’m not even 20K words into the story yet.)

Maybe tomorrow I’ll find my noise-canceling headphones (they’re buried in this mess somewhere) and see if I can write more than a hundred words so I can get this story moving.

But that reminds me that I need to find my outline. Again. I saw it the other day. I should probably type it up when I come across it because I’m not at all sure how I’m going to get from where I am to where I need to be.

Maybe I can write a fight scene of me vs chaos?

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