More from the untitled WiP that I’ve been posting from.
This follows from last week’s snippet.
As Veren joined her, he saw the boy turn his attention toward her, gazing at her in adoration as if she was a dream come to life, then the fear that was part of the reaction to all strangers here – and everyone who was not you was a stranger – took over.
“They’re not interested in me,” Veren observed, swatting one with the broad side of his sword. “Just you and the boy.”
“Well, they’re about to become less interested,” she said darkly. She raised her staff and brought it down sharply, speaking a word of command. There was a silent thunderclap and then it was just the three of them.
“That was probably not wise,” Veren said. “You’ve just gotten the Temple’s attention.” He seemed nervous. “We need to move.”
An overly long blurb:
Magic had reasserted itself. Banished for millennia, it could no longer be contained and erupted, bursting forth with a surge of power that had never been known before, and which, mercifully, has not been repeated since.
Unfortunately, no one believed in magic anymore, so no one knew what to do with it, not even those most directly affected: not those who had mutated overnight into creatures of legend, not those born as something other than human, not those who retained human but found themselves touched in other ways, with special powers and abilities.
Almost no one.
There were a few. A few who had held on to dreams and understandings, who believed in the things that others called fantasy. These few took roles as adepts, as teachers and counselors, leading the way into the new age.
There were some, of course, who rejected the changes. They persecuted the Abominations, as they called them, they drove them out of the cities and into the wilds.
And, gradually, a balance was achieved.
Outside the cities, in the wilds, there arose villages, their inhabitants, human and non, living together in peace and harmony with each other and with the natural world that was feared by the city dwellers.
In the cities, Tech ruled. But magic, or, rather, magic power, was not forgotten, nor entirely abandoned, and Temples grew, their priests (who had no power of their own) seeking Power, seeking to harness it for their own ends.
But also in the cities, magic remained.
Humans were still born with special abilities, special senses. They learned not to talk about them, not to reveal that they were “different” – if they did, they were ostracized, driven out away from the general population.
Veren was one such human.
Mutants were still born each year, but in smaller numbers than during the Awakening. Some infants were killed by their parents, and some were hidden away for a few years, abandoned when their differences could no longer be hidden.
Jopie was one such child.
And in the wilds, humans and mutants continued to live in harmony, and to practice magic. But occasionally one would be born with a wild talent, something strong and different than what was normal for their village. They felt isolated, because there was no one to help them understand their gift. Some were driven mad by the visions they saw, others went in search of help when the visions became too much to handle.
Kestra was one such person.
(Yeah, I know it’s too long. But the book is a long way from being finished so I have lots of time to work on it.)
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2 responses to “Sunday Snippet, April 19, 2020”
I wonder what the temple might do now it’s aware of her.
When is this book going to be done because this is intriguing as all hell! Very curious to know what the Temple will do, and I absolutely love the line about all strangers who are not your are strangers.
Also, that blurb. I feel like that should be the introduction of the whole book told from some outsider narrator. I know you said working blurb but I am completely enthralled by it and I want it IN the book. I am in love.