Rainbow Snippet for 10-19-2019

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I’m gearing up for NaNoWriMo next month and have almost definitely decided that I will most likely probably be working on my “Steampunk thing.”  So, since I’m looking over what I have written of it (less than 2000 words) I thought I’d post bits from it to help me stay focused on it.

(Apologies for any language usage that’s anachronistic. I’ll deal with that once the first draft is done.)

This picks up from last week which ended with: Puzzled and curious, I looked down at the newspaper clipping.

Inventor seeks general laborer to assist with flying ship. Carpentry skills required. Will train for other duties. Pay: 10s/week. Apply in person to V.R. Madison, 135 Pearl Place.

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It wasn’t a fit night for man nor beast. It was cold and dark and getting colder and darker. And wetter. The fog from the snow melt was bad enough, but the all day drizzle had turned into a good downpour and the wind lashed rain that was just a hair above freezing.

Ordinarily I would have been holed up in the ramshackle shanty that passes for my home, trying to stay dry – or at least no more than damp – but the words “flying ship” had sent a jolt of excitement through me. Widow Cooper had been right; ever since I had seen my first airship as a wee lad I’d dreamed of being aboard one of the great flying ships that occasionally flew over the city or moored at the docks. V.R. Madison was only advertising for general construction help, but maybe, just maybe, there might be a crew position available, and I was going to do my level best to fill it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

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8 responses to “Rainbow Snippet for 10-19-2019

  1. Vivid words that draw the reader in from the beginning! (heart)

    Question about NaNoWriMo, was the site really messed up when you visited? Links overlapping, making it impossible to read or click on anything? I’m trying to figure out if it’s a problem on my end or theirs. (wry grin)

  2. Fantastic description, and his eagerness just jumps out. Love it! 💖

  3. JLG

    Ooh, you had me at airship! Nice start.

  4. Great description, you can practically feel the cold and dank.

  5. louiselyons0132017

    Great description, and the weather made me shiver!

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