Rainbow Snippet for 3-2-2019

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Rainbow Snippets is a group for LGBTQ+ authors, bloggers, and readers to gather once a week and share six sentences from a work of fiction–a WIP or a finished work or even a 6-sentence book recommendation (no spoilers please!).   Check out all the other awesome snippets by clicking on the picture above.

Picking up from last week’s snippet from a neglected WiP.  It’s unedited, so in the words of our fearless leader, “Squint.”


“Your kind isn’t welcome here.”

“Our kind?” Even as he spoke his stomach clenched. Tommy hadn’t trusted the bouncer, hadn’t wanted to let him send them out here. Looking back there had been something in his manner that should have alerted him, but they were being thrown out of the bar for being underage and they hadn’t had much choice: let him put them in a cab or spend the night on the street, wet and cold with wind chills in the minus thirties.  









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9 responses to “Rainbow Snippet for 3-2-2019

  1. Yup, definitely don’t like him…nasty fellow.

  2. I was afraid of that. What an arse.

  3. Grrr…there’s a different f-word that I want to call that guy. 😤

  4. As I thought…horrible guy.

  5. louiselyons013

    Ouch! I really want to smack that guy in his nasty mouth.

  6. This encounter is going downhill on a sled.

  7. stephaniedanielsonauthor

    Oy…charming fellow. Not.

  8. smithandskarry1

    Grr words aren’t strong enough for idiots like that…

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