Rainbow Snippet for 6-2-2018

rainbow logo 1

Rainbow Snippets is a group for LGBTQ+ authors, bloggers, and readers to gather once a week and share six sentences from a work of fiction–a WIP or a finished work or even a 6-sentence book recommendation (no spoilers please!).   Check out all the other awesome snippets by clicking on the picture above.


I’m back! It’s been a couple months but I think I have the new work schedule sorted out now and will be able to keep up with blog hops. I hope so, anyhow, because I’ve missed all of you.

I’m not sure what I’ll be posting from – it may change each week depending on my mood, but this week it’s from Book Five of the Academy of the Accord (fantasy) series that I have been (and will be) working on for forever.

A bit of background on the characters in this snippet.

Kordelm and Wellhym are warriors, captains at the Academy, and lovers.

Marsden is the commander of the garrison there, and a father figure to the two of them since he practically raised them.

Draethlen is 10 years old, and is a new cadet at the academy. Marsden rescued him from an orphanage where he was sexually abused by the headmaster.

Marsden has just finished telling Kordelm and Wellhym about how he came to find Draethlen and what had happened to him.

(This book is my current edition of editing hell, so… squint.)


“Right now,” Marsden continued, “we need to focus on helping Draethlen. I don’t think the boy has ever known a lick of kindness in his entire life. I know he doesn’t trust anyone, at least not men. And that’s where you two come in.”

“Us?” Kordelm looked at Marsden, startled. “But we’re what he fears.”

“No,” Wellhym said before Marsden could speak. “We are what his tormentors fear.”  Both of them turned to look at him.  “I’ve been where he is,” Wellhym said softly.  “Not the rape or physical abuse, but the bullying and the name calling.”  He found himself studying his boots.  “I – I grew up in a small farming community.  I was… different… and different is never good.”

He looked up when he felt a hand on his shoulder: Kordelm had moved silently to stand beside him. Their eyes locked for a moment, then he smiled, and turned to Marsden, who was smiling at the two of them.

“I was right – you two are exactly what he needs.”








Filed under writing

10 responses to “Rainbow Snippet for 6-2-2018

  1. Oh, I like these two. I can only imagine how that poor child suffered but bet they’ll be great for him. Thank you for sharing. Best wishes!

  2. AM

    I hope those two can help bring healing.

    Good to see you back! I was actually thinking about you the other day and wondering what you were up to. Looking forward to seeing what you share with us!

  3. Aww, such a sweet scene! He’s right, they probably are.

    Welcome back!

  4. Great snippet. I love the way these interact. I also love your comment about writing these forever. I worked on a series with S L Danielson which currently runs to 13 books and we’re still getting ideas for more.

  5. I like this interaction and the tension between them. Great snip!

  6. I love the tension and interaction between these two. Great snip.

  7. Yay! You’re back. I like how Wellhym associates with the child before they ever meet. It’s heartwarming.

  8. Agreed. Different is always tricky, but I’m liking those two.

  9. Oh wow, poor guys. I really like this. And welcome back.

  10. I think Marsden is probably right! ♡

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )

Connecting to %s

This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.