Rainbow Snippet for 2-3-2018

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I’m posting excerpts from Doll, a little F/f BDSM story that I started back in January of 2014. It’s kind of a UFO (UnFinished Object) that is sort of turning back into a WiP. We’ll see.

Picking up from last week:

Unbidden, my mind conjured up fantasies of her touch, and I shuddered. 

I had never wanted anyone – man or woman – the way I wanted her.

For a moment I considered slipping a note into her coat pocket with my name and phone number, but that would be far too forward and presumptuous, not to mention that it sounded like something from a bad Doris Day movie. With a sigh I ran my hands along her coat, smoothing out imaginary wrinkles, wishing…

I didn’t intend to look for her when I left the coat room, but I couldn’t seem to help myself. 









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11 responses to “Rainbow Snippet for 2-3-2018

  1. I’m really liking where this is going. I’m sure she’s being watched most carefully.

  2. So sweet. I hope she gets what she wants. I can just imagine what those two might get up to together.

  3. Hmm, maybe the alluring woman will be looking for her?

  4. louiselyons013

    Aww, I hope the woman she longs for wants her just as much.

  5. AM

    With any luck, the not being able to help herself goes both ways.

  6. Oh, you really make us feel for her.

  7. Gotta love attraction. :) Well done.

  8. Sounds like she must look for her.

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