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I’m posting excerpts from Doll, a little F/f BDSM story that I started back in January of 2014. It’s kind of a UFO (UnFinished Object) that is sort of turning back into a WiP. We’ll see.
Picking up from last week, and Doll’s memory/flashback to her meeting with the woman with the boots and bullwhip.
“What is your name?”
Her voice was surprisingly warm and gentle and I felt blessed to have had her speak to me.
“Barbara, Ma’am,” I replied, taking the coat that she handed to me.
“Barbara,” she repeated. “Thank you.”
I had never liked my name, but hearing it from her lips sent a surge of desire through me.
9 responses to “Rainbow Snippet for 1-20-2018”
And the steam keeps rising from this story…not that I mind. (fans self)
Can’t wait for the rest of this :) hothot HOTTT <3
Definitely can feel the tension!
The tension is building beautifully
Lovely scene! Sounds like Barbara is a lucky woman! <3
I’m liking those two. Always hot when someone pays attention.
Love the way the tension is building.
The tension is building so well
Nice scene – I like how the was her name was said made her like it more ;)