Rainbow Snippet for 1-20-2018

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Rainbow Snippets is a group for LGBTQ+ authors, bloggers, and readers to gather once a week and share six sentences from a work of fiction–a WIP or a finished work or even a 6-sentence book recommendation (no spoilers please!).   Check out all the other awesome snippets by clicking on the picture above.

I’m posting excerpts from Doll, a little F/f BDSM story that I started back in January of 2014. It’s kind of a UFO (UnFinished Object) that is sort of turning back into a WiP. We’ll see.

Picking up from last week, and Doll’s memory/flashback to her meeting with the woman with the boots and bullwhip.


“What is your name?”

Her voice was surprisingly warm and gentle and I felt blessed to have had her speak to me.

“Barbara, Ma’am,” I replied, taking the coat that she handed to me.

“Barbara,” she repeated. “Thank you.” 

I had never liked my name, but hearing it from her lips sent a surge of desire through me.









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9 responses to “Rainbow Snippet for 1-20-2018

  1. And the steam keeps rising from this story…not that I mind. (fans self)

  2. Can’t wait for the rest of this :) hothot HOTTT <3

  3. Definitely can feel the tension!

  4. The tension is building beautifully

  5. Lovely scene! Sounds like Barbara is a lucky woman! <3

  6. I’m liking those two. Always hot when someone pays attention.

  7. Love the way the tension is building.

  8. The tension is building so well

  9. louiselyons013

    Nice scene – I like how the was her name was said made her like it more ;)

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