Rainbow Snippet for 1-13-2018

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I’m posting excerpts from Doll, a little F/f BDSM story that I started back in January of 2014. It’s kind of a UFO (UnFinished Object) that is sort of turning back into a WiP. We’ll see.

 

Picking up from last week, and Doll’s memory/flashback to her meeting with the woman with the boots and bullwhip.

…she owned the room simply by walking into it.

She wore black leather boots – fashion, not fetish. Beneath her long black leather coat, she wore a grey wool skirt that fell to mid-calf and a white blouse, probably silk. She had no jewelry other than a silver and black watch that I saw a glimpse of as she handed me her coat.

There was nothing about her that said she was part of the scene, and yet…

I felt her gaze on me and I shivered. I was used to men looking at me, used to their stares and appraisal, but she was different; it wasn’t my body that she was appraising, but my soul, my submissiveness, my willingness to please. 

It was that willingness – that need – to please that made me tremble, made me pray to be found… not worthy, but acceptable.

 

 

 

 

 

 

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9 responses to “Rainbow Snippet for 1-13-2018

  1. I love how you’ve made a potentially frumpy outfit sound sexy

  2. AM

    Interesting how she’s dressed for style rather than for the scene.

  3. Well that was pretty hot (fans self)

  4. Loved the description in this.

  5. I like the connection between the two and Doll’s awareness of the other woman.

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