Rainbow Snippet for 12-23-2017

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Rainbow Snippets is a group for LGBTQ+ authors, bloggers, and readers to gather once a week and share six sentences from a work of fiction–a WIP or a finished work or even a 6-sentence book recommendation (no spoilers please!).   Check out all the other awesome snippets by clicking on the picture above.

I’m posting excerpts from Doll, a little F/f BDSM story that I started back in January of 2014 for Siobhan Muir’s Thursday Threads Flash Fiction Challenge. It got a little over the word limit, but I liked it, so decided to keep it as the start an eventual novel. Maybe.

I don’t normally write in first person so I have no idea how this happened.  I’m blaming the writing prompt.

I also don’t normally write non spec-fic.

I also have no idea where this is going. It was and will probably continue to be) written in snippet form. (I was writing a few lines a week back then for another snippet group.)

Picking up from last week which ended with our narrator, Doll, being pulled to her feet with the end of a bullwhip wrapped around her throat.

Gentle fingers tangled in my hair and lips – soft but firm – captured mine and I yielded to them with a soft hungry moan.  I couldn’t help it; I was trained not to hide my emotions or my responses — hiding them was a form of lying and my Owner demanded truth, accepted nothing less than truth. 

I was led a few steps away from the others and pulled close, into a warm embrace.  Those same lips teased my ear.

“Mine,” she whispered, and I shivered in pleasure at the word.  “Tell me about the others.”








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5 responses to “Rainbow Snippet for 12-23-2017

  1. CFWhite

    That gave me goose pimples! Great snippet!!!

  2. Beautiful scene! It would be nice if we all felt we could honestly express our feelings like that! <3

  3. louiselyons013

    Lovely descriptive scene, very sensual :)

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