Daily Archives: September 30, 2017

Rainbow Snippet for 9-30-2017

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Rainbow Snippets is a group for LGBTQ+ authors, bloggers, and readers to gather once a week and share six sentences from a work of fiction–a WIP or a finished work or even a 6-sentence book recommendation (no spoilers please!).   Check out all the other awesome snippets by clicking on the picture above.

More from Onyx Sun, (which really will be finished some day) picking up from last week.


Ni drew a deep breath, staring at the chamber. 

“He is a Ferelian.  They…”  Ni frowned.  “They are not native to the planet we were on.  They are from Ferelis Three and they are… They are a primitive people, they do not have space travel.”

“Then he did not get there by himself.”  She frowned.  “Isn’t Ferelis a proscribed system?”

“Very,” Ayess said.  “The penalty for going there is death.”



Ayess’ race does not have words for he/she/his/hers, etc, because they are (for lack of a better term) hermaphroditic. Their pronouns to refer to other members of their race are “ni” (for he/she/him/her), “ni-es” (his/hers), “ni-en” (they/them) and “ni-en-es” for theirs.








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