Daily Archives: September 23, 2017

Rainbow Snippet for 9-23-2017

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Rainbow Snippets is a group for LGBTQ+ authors, bloggers, and readers to gather once a week and share six sentences from a work of fiction–a WIP or a finished work or even a 6-sentence book recommendation (no spoilers please!).   Check out all the other awesome snippets by clicking on the picture above.

More from Onyx Sun, (which really will be finished some day) picking up from last week.


“What happens if it fails with him inside?”

“He dies.”

 “Then let’s get him out of there.”


Taliya turned to face Ayess, searching ni-es gaze. “Ayess…”

“No.  He… He killed everyone. Ripped them apart…”

The Araxian was shaking and she put a hand on ni-es arm.  “And if we let him die we will be no less killers than he is.  And we will never know why it happened.”


Ayess’ race does not have words for he/she/his/hers, etc, because they are (for lack of a better term) hermaphroditic. Their pronouns to refer to other members of their race are “ni” (for he/she/him/her), “ni-es” (his/hers), “ni-en” (they/them) and “ni-en-es” for theirs.








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