Rainbow Snippet for 7-29-2017

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Rainbow Snippets is a group for LGBTQ+ authors, bloggers, and readers to gather once a week and share six sentences from a work of fiction–a WIP or a finished work or even a 6-sentence book recommendation (no spoilers please!).   Check out all the other awesome snippets by clicking on the picture above.


Picking up from last week’s snippet.

“I’m beginning to wish I hadn’t found her.” 

“Do you really mean that?”

She considered the question for a moment. “Yes and no.  On the one hand, I have freed another slave, but on the other…”  She closed her eyes for a moment and when she opened them she looked into the Araxian’s eyes.  “On the other hand, I liked it a lot better when it was just the two of us and I wish it still was.”

Taliya sat up straighter, staring at ni. “I’m seeing it again.”

“Seeing what again?” 

“Your eyes.”

“My eyes?  You’ve seen them every day since you bought me.”

She shook her head impatiently.  “They were… glowing, sort of.  Not bright, but just kind of … glowing.”

Ayess’ race does not have words for he/she/his/hers, etc, because they are (for lack of a better term) hermaphroditic. Their pronouns to refer to other members of their race are “ni” (for he/she/him/her), “ni-es” (his/hers), “ni-en” (they/them) and “ni-en-es” for theirs.








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11 responses to “Rainbow Snippet for 7-29-2017

  1. Oh! Does the glowing mean what I think it does?? :D

  2. jlgfellers

    This is a WIP, correct? Because, if it’s out, I want purchase info. I’m enthralled as a reader.

    • Aw,thanks! It’s actually in revision at the moment. I’m hoping I can get the current scene beaten into submission soon so I can give the whole thing another once over.

      (If you’re interested in beta reading, hit me up on FB.)

  3. Oooh…is it an emotion that makes his eyes glow?

  4. Glowing eyes. I like that. Does that mean ni has magic powers?

  5. Jana Denardo

    Very nice scene.

  6. You know we’re all jonesing to find out why Ayess is glowing, right?

  7. I’m so intrigued by this. Nice snippet.

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