Rainbow Snippet for 5-6-2017

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Picking up from last week’ snippet of Onyx Sun.

Taliya pressed the buzzer on the door, trying to recover her original excitement at having found Luzita, but she was finding it difficult to summon any enthusiasm for this reunion.

And what little enthusiasm she had managed to find vanished when she heard Luzita’s voice. 

“Go away and leave me alone. I told you I don’t need anything and if I did I don’t want it from you.”

Anger flared and Taliya took a deep breath to get a grip on her temper before she opened the door and stepped through it, letting it close behind her.








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8 responses to “Rainbow Snippet for 5-6-2017

  1. Uh Oh, look out <3 I wonder who's going to come out of this one with a whole skin. Great snippet :)

  2. Uh Oh. You give it her Taliya. Start as you mean to go on

  3. Ooo, feel the tension building…

  4. Poor Luzita has been through so much. :-/

  5. AM

    Something sure is about to boil over.

  6. siobhanmuir

    I can understand Taliya’s hope and Luzita’s anger. Good snippet, P.T.

  7. Jana Denardo

    I feel bad that this isn’t going how she hoped.

  8. Hmmm, doesn’t sound like things will go well…

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