Rainbow Snippet for 3-25-2017

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Rainbow Snippets is a group for LGBTQ+ authors, bloggers, and readers to gather once a week and share six sentences from a work of fiction–a WIP or a finished work or even a 6-sentence book recommendation (no spoilers please!).   Check out all the other awesome snippets by clicking on the picture above.

I’m still posting from Onyx Sun, a science fiction novel that is currently in revision. The revisions are turning out to be more complex than originally expected so the release date is, um, to be determined. (I’ve given up trying to predict one, but I have at least one more round of revisions after the current one.)

I’m picking up from last week. (“We’ve had her for far too long,” Letham said. “Pendelia Four is where we got her and I don’t know what Marcelan was thinking.  I know what he was thinking with, but that’s beside the point.”)

(This part is still in revision so squint because I haven’t gotten to it yet.)

The slaver that had ushered Taliya inside gave Letham a warning glare and turned the monitor so that Taliya could see it.  “That her?”

The woman on the screen was sitting in a chair, listlessly staring at a view screen that gave an image of the market outside. She was petite but curvy, and her lustrous black hair fell in dark waves to her hips.

“That’s her,” Taliya said.  Her eyes were dull and her face lacked its usual animation, but it was Luzita.

“I’ll go get her,” Letham said and disappeared toward the interior of the ship.

“Clean her up first,” the other one said and he nodded, waving one hand to signal that he had heard.

Taliya watched him leave and then turned her attention back to the other man.  “I have a collar and chip,” she told him. “And don’t try to inflate the price just because I came looking for her specifically, because if I wanted to I could make a whole lot of trouble for you for buying an illegally sold slave.”

 

 

 

 

 

 

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9 responses to “Rainbow Snippet for 3-25-2017

  1. Yay, it’s her! I’m looking forward to Luzita’s reaction. 🙂

  2. Ah, poor Luzita…and poor Taliya.

  3. Great that they’ll finally be together again – but I have a feeling their problems won’t end here… 😦

  4. AM

    Ooh, go Taliya. I can imagine just how much trouble she could make!

  5. Jana Denardo

    I’m thinking she ought to make trouble for them regardless.

  6. I have not seen this part before…have I? If I have I don’t remember it.

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