Rainbow Snippet for 1-16-2016

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Continuing from Disturbed Magic (until or unless a better title comes along) and picking up from last week’s post, in which a group of half a dozen guards from a merchant caravan were harassing a woman in an alley.

This is a rough draft that’s not currently being worked on, so all the usual warnings apply, and then some.

 

The men finally tired of their game and one of them knocked the blade from her hand, and grasped her wrist, pulling her to him as she cried out in pain and sobbed, struggling.

“Let her go.”  The words were out of Kel’s mouth with no regard for the odds and all six men turned to see who was interrupting their fun.  Seeing Kel standing alone in the alley, they burst into laughter, and Kel smiled.  Sometimes being small was an advantage – they were seriously underestimating the danger they were in.

“Who’s going to make us?” one of them asked, evidently deciding to humor the slight figure facing them.

 

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14 responses to “Rainbow Snippet for 1-16-2016

  1. Haha, you have to watch the small ones. They’re used to being picked on–it’s all the danger of the big ones, concentrated into a teeny tiny–deadly–package.

  2. louiselyons013

    I can’t wait to see what happens next. It sounds like he’s going to surprise them 🙂

  3. Oh, hell yeah. I’m cheering on the underdog. Nice. You definitely have my attention.

  4. Sounds really good. I love a hero who doesn’t exactly look as dangerous as he is.

  5. The intrigue continues 🙂 I get the feeling the guards are about to be served with a steaming plate of whoop ass.

  6. Get them, Kel! Something tells me I’m gonna like this guy a lot. 🙂

  7. Jana Denardo

    Small but fierce, I love it. I can’t wait to see more.

  8. Ooh, this is going to be good! I hope we get a little more of this scene next week!

  9. *grins* Love how you’ve built up the anticipation here. I’m wondering what Kel has hidden up his sleeve, because it’s clearly going to be good.

  10. chrisquintonwriter

    Yup, gotta watch out for the small ones, the terriers who know beyond a doubt they’re really Rottweilers.

  11. oh boy, it will sure be interesting to see what happens next

  12. I believe there’s more to Kel than they realize. 🙂

  13. A-ha! He’s got them on the back foot already 🙂

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